Pitch statement
Jump, Freeze, hide, attack run as fast as you can, race to the highest point of the world, where there are no challenges and barriers, where there are no hidden mischief from the evil Witch, where our world is in normality or is it?
Play #HuntofTruth
Play #HuntofTruth
dont mean to rain on your parade but this feels a bit rushed. dont be scared to use full stops :)
ReplyDeletei feel like that too, but i don't know how to improve on it? any tips?
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